Draft#1 Research Paper ( Free higher education ?)
In class, we watched a documentary, Where to Invade Next , which is produced and directed by Michael Moore. He traveled nine different countries of the world, to collect some good ideas from them, and to bring them back to the United States of America for its progress.This documentary is a nonfiction narrative and where Moore plays a role of an invader. He invaded “Rapunzel of Slovenia”, who well known as magical fairyland. He met with various university students, who study there without having any debt. An idea of Free higher education from that documentary, are argument made in my research paper. Free higher education, is a link provided to my first draft of the research paper. Who did you work with to compose your research paper? Was this a good approach? I work by myself to compose this formal assignment. But our professor gave us an option to work along with partner. The first lecture, we got in learning common was so helpful for how to do quality research. I never use Boolean operations of Academic search premier correctly before. And I think so this was very good approach for doing research paper. What rhetorical mode and genre are you using? In class we worked on these four different rhetorical modes, which are: Description, Exposition, Argumentation and Narration (DEAN). But for this formal assignment, I used Argumentation rhetorical mode and Research paper genre. When did you write this project? Good approach? I did write it on 23th of November and submit it today(30 November). I did submit the hard copy of my first draft of research paper. It was good approach, so that I have enough time to make another revised draft and upload it on my webpage before the due date of digital portfolio. Where did you write this project? Good approach? I did use google docs to write this project and it was good approach. Why did you choose to write about your chosen topic? Good choice? I did choose to write about this chosen topic because the issue raised in the documentary “where to invade next” is Should America needs to provide debt free higher education is very current and very important. It’s about the future of nation. If other European nations can provide free education, then why not the world power, the United States. Even though we paid more taxes than the European people. I think I made a good choice by choosing this topic. How did it feel to write this argument ("during, after, and since")? Do you have any "if only" moments that can help you revise the draft? I feel like this very interesting topic because I’m a college student and this issue is prevalent in college life. At some point in life every student thinks about the affordability factor of higher education. Most of the student after graduating from high school, did not able to pursue their career and start doing jobs for to manage their financial condition. Yes, I have “if only” moments that helps me to revise the draft. How will you revise your argument? I did submit the hard copy of my paper. After I will get the feedback from my professor then, I will revise and edit my paper and upload it on my webpage. Sometimes, I used site such as Grammarly, to check for any remaining errors. For additional help I will go to library and sign up for tutoring, that will help a lot to edit and organize my paper very well.
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